I was flying again. Like a bird in the sky. A stork. No, not a stork, a sparrow…a wild goose…whatever. I was a bird, any bird. All the heaviness was gone. Those dark cobble streets of the town where life had stopped. Those walls of the houses, long covered in stains but used to be bright yellow goodness knows when. And people…those small-minded people who seemed to know everything. Every single thing. Who would never pass me without an open stare or whispering behind my back. Or that dull phrase from the bravest ones…about how promising my future seemed to be years ago. So what?! Like they did care! If not me, who would they talk about? Who would they poke their pretty little fingers at? I won’ t let to be dragged back down. Not this time. I could finally breathe. And see. I was free…to be. To be myself again. But you wouldn’ t understand – you have never been a bird. All the pain was gone and nobody could hurt me. Never again.
Another small white bump in the spoon was melting. Reaching for a syringe with her trembling, pale fingers she was ready for the last flight…
trajectory of a tear
longer than any path taken
loneliness is not contagious
Image courtesy of Jason Wolcott
Reblogged this on More Tea.
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ah. beatifically…heart-wrenching
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Thanks. Yes, melting sometimes is…
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Awesome haiku !
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Thank you, close to my heart.
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Ooh, I love the trajectory of a tear! Tough story.
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Thank you, Anne. Not sure how I ended up in the middle of it. 🙂
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So damn sad, yet beautiful. Such profound sadness.
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Yes, somehow wandered onto the sad notes this time…
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These prompts stir my fears a bit as I’m not trained to write. The words pour out from time to time for no reason. I will try though. Thank you.
Love, Renee
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Your writing is beautiful, Renee – would love to see you there.
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Oh honey so is yours. I’m glad I found you.
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How cruel.. I shiver from the strength in this writing and your haiku. First your story sends a dagger in my gut, and then a haiku to twist it. Superbly done.
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Thank you, I am really flattered by your comment. But yes…cruel indeed. Somehow couldn’ t go any other way with “melting”.
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I didn’t know where this was heading.
Hard landing at the end
Well done – but so sad
JzB
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It really is nice to know you were not sure where it will all end, JzB. Sad…yes… C’est la vie, my friend.
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for a moment i was flying with her… loving that feeling of transcendence… then, damnit, i realized i didn’t wanna join her after all ^^ such beautiful writing, ese… painful an beautiful
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And such a nice comment you wrote, KZ! Thank you. The feeling of flying…yes, beautiful until…
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What an awesome piece, Esenga.. Sad yet beautiful. And am so smitten by that haiku. Very powerful and effective. Loved reading this.
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Thank you very much, muZer. I am pleased to know you were moved by my writing.
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We all find our own flight paths…
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…how could we not…
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