This is the haiku by O.Mabson on Carpe Diem Special to inspire us to write our own:
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In the garden pool,
dark and still, a steppingstone
releases the moon
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And here’ s mine I tried to knit together in the similar spirit and mood:
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moonlight steppingstones
tripping over the shadows
my path lost and found
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Nicely done!
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The feeling of Southard is very strong in this haiku.
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Very nice…tripping over shadows!
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To have found one’s path again…what a relief!
Releasing the Moon
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Finding path in the moon light…
Serene picture created! 🙂
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You definitely captured Mabson’s tone and spirit — gorgeous.
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Love the tripping over shadows…
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my path would probably lead me flat on my face, or treading water..
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creative haiku that finishes Mabson quite nicely. ♥
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