Carpe Diem Haiku Special *O. Mabson Southard’s ‘this morning’s rainbow’*

This is a haiku by O.Mabson Southard to inspire us on today’ s Carpe Diem Special Challenge:

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This morning’s rainbow
shares its deep violet edge
with the misty moon.

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I follow with mine trying to keep the same 5-7-5 syllables structure, mood and spirit:

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new dawn every day
brings rippling patterns of clouds
yet sun is the same

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Carpe Diem Haiku

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