Carpe Diem Haiku Special *G. Gay’s ‘Sweat Lodge’*

Today on Carpe Diem Special there’s a haiku by Garry Gay to inspire us to write our own:

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sweat lodge –
my only vision
is of the cool water

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Here is my humble attempt of creating one of the same mood and spirit:

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sunburnt sand
sweat drop rolling down my cleavage
taste of the sea

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Carpe Diem Haiku

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