Carpe Diem’s *Little Ones ‘Shaken Not Stirred-Elfje’*

We were challenged by Chèvrefeuille on Carpe Diem to write a “Shaken not stirred-elfje” with in the first line 1 syllable; in the second line 2 syllables; in the third line 3 syllables; in the fourth line 4 syllables and in the last line 1 syllable. I decided to give it a try:

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tense
among
melting clouds
sky-dance of hawks
kee-eer

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Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

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