Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge *Celestine’s “ribbon of colours”*

On By Ese' s VoiceIn Haiku

Celestine of Reading Pleasure has written a beautiful haiku and our goal was to write a second stanza to it. I gave it a try:

ribbon of colours
streaks across the endless sky
                                                 dance of the spirits                          (Celestine)

finding paths through vivid tangles
                     careless touches of summer breeze           (Ese)

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

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4 thoughts on “Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge *Celestine’s “ribbon of colours”*”

  3. Awesome continuation of the Tan Renga Ese … what a joy to see you here again … you were missed …. Your stnza is so spiritual and full of love for nature … Thank you for sharing.

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