Carpe Diem Haiku Inner Self (Solitude)

On August 17, 2014September 11, 2014 By Ese' s VoiceIn Haiku

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unable to find
what is not there
another lost soul

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a glimpse of light
through a crack in the concrete wall
reaching inside out

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Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

7 thoughts on “Carpe Diem Haiku Inner Self (Solitude)”

Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

searching for your inner self is a lot like searching for that gap in concrete…

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August 17, 2014 at 8:49 pm Reply
artmusedog

lovely series of solitude haiku ~ first one is my favorite but all are excellent ~ thanks,

artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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August 17, 2014 at 9:03 pm Reply
payoutpolly

I have been a lost soul many times in this life, searching for light where there seemed to be none. I especially like the line about the glimpse of light through the crack in the concrete wall. This is how it feels to me to finally see a little happiness outside the prison of depression.
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/08/peace-in-solitude.html

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August 17, 2014 at 9:29 pm Reply
Gillena Cox

nice set luv that third one best

have a nice Sunday

much love…

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August 17, 2014 at 10:16 pm Reply
Chèvrefeuille

Wow! Ese this is such a nice post … especially your third haiku is very strong in it’s spirituality … ‘a crack in the wall through which the inner comes out’ … that’s how the Inner Self is discovered. Tearing down the wall to find the light of the Inner Self … that’s awesome.

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August 17, 2014 at 10:46 pm Reply
Cheryl-Lynn

Oh yes, that crevice in the concrete!! beautifully expressed!

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August 18, 2014 at 1:13 am Reply
petrujviljoen

I also liked the crack in the wall where the light shone through. Well done.

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August 18, 2014 at 5:45 pm Reply