* * *
unable to find
what is not there
another lost soul
* * *
a glimpse of light
through a crack in the concrete wall
reaching inside out
* * *
* * *
unable to find
what is not there
another lost soul
* * *
a glimpse of light
through a crack in the concrete wall
reaching inside out
* * *
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searching for your inner self is a lot like searching for that gap in concrete…
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lovely series of solitude haiku ~ first one is my favorite but all are excellent ~ thanks,
artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
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I have been a lost soul many times in this life, searching for light where there seemed to be none. I especially like the line about the glimpse of light through the crack in the concrete wall. This is how it feels to me to finally see a little happiness outside the prison of depression.
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/08/peace-in-solitude.html
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nice set luv that third one best
have a nice Sunday
much love…
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Wow! Ese this is such a nice post … especially your third haiku is very strong in it’s spirituality … ‘a crack in the wall through which the inner comes out’ … that’s how the Inner Self is discovered. Tearing down the wall to find the light of the Inner Self … that’s awesome.
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Oh yes, that crevice in the concrete!! beautifully expressed!
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I also liked the crack in the wall where the light shone through. Well done.
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