This week Carpe Diem Tan Renga inspiration is a beautiful haiku, written by Suzanne of Cutting to the Chase. Our goal is to add a second stanza to it.
in the pond
reflected trees and drifting leaves
– autumn’s last show (Suzanne)
wild geese cries from a passing skein
echo through the veil of fog (Ese)
I can hear the geese honking flying south, beautiful completion.
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echo through the veil of fog …..ah ! i can hear it ,sublime painting !
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Wow – I really like that. Your lines add another level to my haiku. Thankyou.
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I can see the reflections in the pond. Nice one!
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I hear the geese as well//
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I admire the way you have added to the picture… as if only part of the painting was done, and you painted the rest…
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