This week the goal of Carpe Diem Tan Renga Squared challenge is to write a second stanza to a beautiful haiku by Björn of Björn Rudbergs Writings, and a new 3-line stanza and 2-line stanza. So – a short linked verse of 4 stanzas.
evening mist
memories are fading
loon is calling (Björn)
dim light of September moon
slips between the parting clouds
weary splashes
around fisherman’ s waders
rocks of empty shore
breeze traces silver threads in hair
last knot. boat roped till the dawn (Ese)
Ese' s Voice 
I like where you took it.. to the moonlit shore, a fisherman.. and the silver hair.. really a very complete image.
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Wonderful continuation Ese and that makes this a nice four stanza renga … thank you for sharing …
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Loved your great double tan renga .. such a wonderful image.
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Beautiful!
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