Carpe Diem Tan Renga Squared *Björn Rudberg’s “Loon is calling”*

On By Ese' s VoiceIn Haiku

This week the goal of Carpe Diem Tan Renga Squared challenge is to write a second stanza to a beautiful haiku by Björn of Björn Rudbergs Writings, and a new 3-line stanza and 2-line stanza. So – a short linked verse of 4 stanzas.

evening mist
memories are fading
                                       loon is calling                          (Björn)

dim light of September moon
slips between the parting clouds

weary splashes
around fisherman’ s waders
rocks of empty shore

breeze traces silver threads in hair
                    last knot. boat roped till the dawn        (Ese)

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

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