The goal of this new feature on Carpe Diem is to write a four stanza renga, inspired on the song of our choice. I found it really challenging so here we go…
husky whispers
keeps tickling my ear
weariless till dawn
smell of diesel in the dust
deserts dream about untamed roads
“Thunderbird’ s” roar
before your silhouette
in the doorway
unable to resist fervor
-slipping off my new red shoes
Very nice…
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Nice work and a commendable achievement in form. Kudos Ese – much enjoyed.
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I love the earthiness of these images.
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yes, great imagery
wonderful
cheers
JzB
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Well written Ese … i like your music choice …
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The imagery and nuances here are just delicious, that song ties it so well….what a song too!
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“Husky whispers keep tickling my ear”….how beautifully expressed!
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