This week’ s inspiration on Carpe Diem Special is a haiku, written by Iio Sogi (1421-1502) – a pre-Basho haiku poet:
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ah, for coolness,
it rivals the water’s depth –
this autumn sky
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Here’ s my attempt not to wander too far away from the same mood and spirit:
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the endless night
unable to count the stars
in the frozen pond
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I think it works!
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Gorgeous shot!
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Oh I love this one Ese.. a masterpiece..
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You did not wander too far, this is beautiful!
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beautiful poetry
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Awesome … a very biblical approach of Sogi’s haiku … countless are the stars in the sky, but to count them in the frozen pond will not be a success. Love to use this haiku for one of our upcoming Tan Renga Challlenges Ese
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Thank you very much, Kristjaan, it would be my honour.
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Thanks Ese.
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love your version… true, sometimes magic is all around us, we just have to know where to look for it… you definitely know 🙂
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Beautiful words from a beautiful person…thank you. I keep searching – there’s always a hope 🙂
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