Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars *John Stevenson’s “the train”*

This week the source of inspiration on Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars are haiku, written by John Stevenson:

* * *
the train picks up speed,
in a paper coffee cup
concentric waves

the river always
out there in the dark
late train home

coming home
on the train
… the backyards

* * *

I tried not to wander too far from the same mood and spirit while writing mine:

* * *
crumpled handkerchief
on shiny railroad tracks
departing train

* * *

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai


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