Carpe Diem Haiku Sunday Afternoon

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picnic in the park
fighting over a cracker
two hungry sparrows

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11 thoughts on “Carpe Diem Haiku Sunday Afternoon”

Cheryl-Lynn

That is so cute…well, probably not for the sparrows:)

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February 18, 2015 at 7:39 pm Reply
sheridegrom - From the literary and legislative trenches.

Ese – Perfect visuals, perfect setting – pure perfection.

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February 18, 2015 at 8:34 pm Reply
Nonnie USA

perfect imagery, I can see it!

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February 18, 2015 at 8:37 pm Reply
adaspoetryalcove

Very nicely done! I can see them fighting.

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February 19, 2015 at 2:29 am Reply
Jen

Few things are as vicious as fighting birds!
Nicely done —

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February 19, 2015 at 6:51 am Reply
Suzanne

Your words paint a very vivid picture. 🙂

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February 19, 2015 at 8:05 am Reply
Gillena Cox

luv the surprise of the sparrows

much love…

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February 19, 2015 at 9:42 am Reply
readinpleasure

Wasn’t expecting the last line. Great! 🙂

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February 19, 2015 at 12:40 pm Reply
Forest Man

Lovely haiku

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February 19, 2015 at 4:52 pm Reply
anotherday2paradise

This made me smile, Ese. 🙂 Lovely.

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February 20, 2015 at 5:22 am Reply
Chèvrefeuille

A very cute scene for a sunday afternoon … i like the simpleness in the scene, very strong haiku Ese.

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February 21, 2015 at 5:24 am Reply

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