Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge *Celestine’s “ribbon of colours”*

Celestine of Reading Pleasure has written a beautiful haiku and our goal was to write a second stanza to it. I gave it a try:

ribbon of colours
streaks across the endless sky
                                                 dance of the spirits                          (Celestine)

finding paths through vivid tangles
                     careless touches of summer breeze           (Ese)

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai