There is maybe a bit unexpected, yet original choice of Soen Nakagawa haiku to be our inspiration on Carpe Diem Special.
To this haiku Soen Nakagawa adds, “The word “penis” had never been used before in a haiku, and I was criticized for exposing such a thing! But a penis is just a penis. Nowadays there is confusion regarding sex. But in truth, sexual energy, like digestive energy, is God’s fine energy, Buddha’s energy, cosmic energy.”
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Aiming my penis
out over the steppes
awoken from a nap
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Although not using the “p” word, also Basho has written a haiku of the same mood:
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ought one laugh or cry
when my Morning Glory
withers up
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And now it is my turn – I tried to stay close to the same spirit:
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beer bong contest
dodging queue at restrooms
sigh of relief in rain
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sultry afternoon
shudder of waking manhood
traced by my lips
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You are probably the most emancipated woman I have, personally, come across!
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Interesting hehe
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An awesome response on the haiku by Soen Nakagawa.
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Great response and very true, indeed!
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Shudder indeed 😉
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I admit to quite liking the penis word. Manhood is fine, but there are some really silly words for penis that make me unable to take the object in question seriously! I love that Basho haiku, though. Morning Glory — hee, hee 🙂
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Oh, those lips!
Empties His Bladder
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I knew I would not be disappointed coming here! 🙂 Excellent taste my friend 🙂
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Oh — yes you speak so much of male vulnerabiliy… both to lips and bladder…
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Blimey
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Releasing my flow
Against the bushes
Exhale and relax
What ya think ?
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