Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques *Surprise*

* * *
after the storm
tiptoeing through seaweed strands
-oh, a bead of amber!

* * *
loose kimono
light blue on my shoulder blade
a butterfly

* * *

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai



9 thoughts on “Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques *Surprise*

  1. I especially like the clever playfulness of the second haiku – a butterfly appears, but then changes back to a woman struggling with the loose, wing-like folds of her pale blue kimono 🙂


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