12 thoughts on “October 16th

  1. “we never know”. I like it. It is implied that there is something else to the thought but it doesn’t need to be stated because it is implied. And I like that there is no punctuation or caps. It fits the theme that there is more. It is like an iceberg in the Arctic; you only see a little ice above the water but it is supported by a massive structure that is hidden. Nice work.


    1. Thank you, Andy. I am still learning about all the “laws” of haiku but much more it is writing the way thoughts/words form in my mind. In their own way. That last line does make sense to me indeed as well as leave it open to everyone’ s own imagination.


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